What i thought of is a group of 20-40 people (18+years old) are selected to test out a new ideato take gaming a step further. After the VR attachment for the oculus rift came out (an item that projects your body and surroundings into the game) A new experimental group try to take that to the final step. (but not in the way that the beta group thinks)

The game takes part in an enclosed forest area, with a small rundown(also abandoned) town. The entire area is surrounded by a large barbed-wire fence. Upon first glance, it'd seem like the place wasn't made like this for the game. it seemed for....something much more......(cont-)

As the game is explained to the beta's, The game takes the final leap into making video games a reality. The players are required to wear A special headset with goggles that looks like the oculus, only with a slimmer, sleeker design. (so it'd be easier to run with) As well as a mic/ear piece, bands that go around the wrists, ankles and a heart moniter and a camera mount (so you can see the---

(so you can see the players face and in front surroundings) The players were given guns with a design that put them on the borderline of real/fake looking. The players were put in a large cabin (complete with two bunkrooms, two bathrooms w/stalls(for bath, shower and toilets) a large kitchen and an underground bomb shelter/shooting range just underneath the basement. after being breifed on what---

what to do, how to do it and any survival tips. The admins told the players that the game would start in the morning. ((i forgot to mention they were also informed to never take their glasses off or shoot each other. that night, a few people were awoken to some strange noises outside. Then came a message from the administration that the game would begin in 20 minutes and----

if they weren't ready and in the shooting range in the given time they would be disqualified. All but three players made it in time. As the next objective played on the screen, noises that sounded like something being mauled from upstairs rang through. The administration told the players that when they go upstairs, the other few players would not be there because they were ----

"taken out" by other admins and to add more of a horror effect, the upstairs bed/bunkroom would be a little "redecorated". The players then set off, unaware of the game that is really going on. Okay, you can comment now, tell me what you think of the (not so) basic summary. I'm trying not to reveal too much about the story to prevent from spoiling it...anyway go ahead and give me your honest fe

honest opinion..... (ran outta room......)

it's ok. just dont forget! ^-^

^¬^ night!

I'd love to hear any and all suggestions from anyone and everyone! And if your looking for a good creepypasta, go look up Dead Angel. It's my first original creepypasta! it has nearly 500 views on DA and i also uploaded it to wiki as well as asked several CP readers on youtube (such as CreepsMcPasta, Mr.creepypasta and creepypasta.jr) to do a reading for it. (not sure when it'll be out but...)