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01/01/2015 9:04 PM ·Spoilers

ok here is the next chapter of my book and by the way this chapter isn't meant for the faint of heart ›:) so buckle up for this chapter of warriors cats jaystar's quest for lightclan

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  • Hunger

    01/02/2015 12:21 AM ·Spoilers

    k

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:23 AM ·Spoilers

    i leapt at him claws out and zipped past his side ckaws out and darted around hus abd circled leaving three marks on both sides if him he almost colapsed that was fir my siblings! i said as i flipped backwards in the air and twisted in mid flight and crasged down that was fir my mother!!! hiwnare you doing this??? and this..is for tornear i said as i slid underneath him and kicked uowards flinging

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  • Hunger

    01/02/2015 12:26 AM ·Spoilers

    0/10 put in Shrek

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:27 AM ·Spoilers

    him eight feet in the air and he crasged down on his side i walked to him claws still out and sat beside him. h how did you do that...i narrowed my eyes i should thank you for that..i opend my jaws and he squninted his eyes and stiffend expecting a fatel blow vut i grabbed him by wgat was left of his scruff and lifted him to his feet. wait...you..why are you doing this!! when starclan gave me the

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:32 AM ·Spoilers

    streanth to fight you they also fave me the streanth to soare you..they reminded me that i dont need to kill to win a battle no matter what they've done to me.. emotionally mentally and fisicly... no..i wont let you do this fight me!! kill me! i rather die in battle then die by wounds! you wont die.. i know you wont.. leave my territory i give you this one warning and if you come back....well, you

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:37 AM ·Spoilers

    have seen my power...so.. leave! i yelled as i watched him limp away and fade into the shaddows i glared at tornears body for a second and lowerd my head i walked to the bidy and put a paw on him may you rest in peace my love...i said as i walked to spiderfang and helped her up come on lets go i said but haystar what abou–tornear? i interupted. no what if he comes back...he wont..not for a very

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:41 AM ·Spoilers

    long time..and im glad he wont be coming back to i thought in my head especially with the arrival of three new ckan members soon.. tornear isn't gone he l8ves inside me in more ways in one and i will be proud to give birth to his kits but that is to come in the future as we headed back that night i felt at peace knowing tornear is in a better place and that him and his legacy will live on..

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:43 AM ·Spoilers

    my journy is done..for now there is much more to come in the future and with streanth love hope peace and all other lives i was givin i will enjoy every last bit if it

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  • Jaistraw

    01/02/2015 12:45 AM ·Spoilers

    the end

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  • Villager

    01/04/2015 9:28 PM ·Spoilers

    Lots of spelling mistakes, no quotation marks, and no capitals in names, or beginning of sentences. 3/10 for storyline

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  • Jaistraw

    01/04/2015 10:02 PM ·Spoilers

    ›:( ...›-‹

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  • Jaistraw

    01/04/2015 10:08 PM ·Spoilers

    I KNOW I MADE MISTAKES T'T :'( i just type so fast i miss or accedently type a different letter you dont have to point it out and this is my first book it is at the first stage im still editing the paper version. and i didn't ask for ratings... meany..... ›.‹

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  • Jaistraw

    01/04/2015 10:10 PM ·Spoilers

    your a cruel person and more then just a critic your a bully... im out of here...

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  • Jaistraw

    01/04/2015 11:02 PM ·Spoilers

    Oh look what you did, you hurt gabby's feelings!!! shame on you!!!

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  • Villager

    01/04/2015 11:43 PM ·Spoilers

    Pffff. Dont be so sensitive. Your not perfect. everyone has errors. Im just pointing them out. But sorry if I hurt your fellings.

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  • Jaistraw

    01/05/2015 12:14 AM ·Spoilers

    ok S:)

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  • Brogala

    01/05/2015 1:22 AM ·Spoilers

    Well, if it's any concolation, i loved your book. Yes all the errors pointed out where true, but you where just going with it. i loved the story, and the characters where heartwarming. It was something different. Don't let people get you down just because of their opinion.

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  • Jaistraw

    01/05/2015 12:15 PM ·Spoilers

    ok thx

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  • kids hehe

    01/05/2015 12:51 PM ·Spoilers

    people have options , some say its bad and some say its good , think about artist , they get alot of criticism ... darn it lol

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