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  Lisa

  01/24/2015 12:10 AM ·Spoilers

  ...asked her, confused on what is going on. "You are dead and you have left your body. I've come to take you with me." She paused for a second. "But, I can give you another choice. I can heal you, but doing so will take a month. Even though if you choose to live, you still will come back with me until your body is back to normal." She finished. He didn't know what to say. He looked fine. He had..

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  01/24/2015 12:15 AM ·Spoilers

  ...no burn marks or split ends on his spikes. 'What is she talking about? I look fine.' "What do you mean? I look fine-." He asked but was cut off short. "Look at this and you'll see what I mean." A glowing ball of light appeared in her hand. He looked at it and saw Steel laying her head on something he could not see. He looked closer and saw it was him. He was in really bad shape, just the...

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  01/24/2015 12:20 AM ·Spoilers

  ...way his sister had described him. He took a deep breath and looked at her in the eyes for the first time in all the years they had been apart and said, "I see what you mean and I understand, but I can't leave them alone. They... they need me... I'm sorry if I-." He answered but she cut him off. "It's totally fine. I know how you feel, but I wasn't given this chance when I died. You are the...

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  01/24/2015 12:25 AM ·Spoilers

  ...only one that has had this chance, Black. You can choose to come with me and never see them again. Or, you can choose to wait one month for your body to recover and be able to see them both again. You only have one try at this. If you make a mistake that will change your life the way you didn't want to then you can't take it back. It's your choice." She answered him. He already knew what his...

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  01/24/2015 12:29 AM ·Spoilers

  ...choice was gonna be. "Then I choose to wait one month to see them again." He finally decided. She nodded acknowledging him. "Very well then." She said and a light grew from one of her fingers. She touched his forehead and the light seemed to go inside of him. A cold chill went down his spine. He was going home again once he was ready. (Ok, that's the end of this chapter. I'll continue when...

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  01/24/2015 12:30 AM ·Spoilers

  ...I get the chance.)

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  01/26/2015 3:39 PM ·Spoilers

  Do five nights at freddy's story please

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  01/28/2015 9:00 PM ·Spoilers

  (I'll finish this and start a comic that I've been working on in real life. That will be in pictures though.) [Chapter 6: Life's So Different Now...] A week passed and Steel still couldn't get over Black's departing. She still looks for him beside her when she needs him, but realizes that he's not there. 'Why did you have to go?' She always asked as if she really thought he could hear her...

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  01/28/2015 9:07 PM ·Spoilers

  Shadow always tried to cheer her up, but she still couldn't get over it. He was... gone... All she does is stare out the window looking at people with the ones they love. "Steel, Black will always love you no-." Shadow tried looking at her depressed face but was cut off. "You just don't understand! I can't just get over it like that! You had to go through 50 years of this before you were...

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  01/28/2015 9:14 PM ·Spoilers

  ...reunited with Maria!" She almost broke out crying but instead just pushed past him and ran out the door. "Nobody ever understands me anymore now that he's gone..." She said to herself, walking towards what used to be their favorite spot under a cherry tree that was now in bloom with thousands of light pink flowers. 'I shouldn't be out here grieving over him. I need some rest. I just feel...

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  01/28/2015 9:19 PM ·Spoilers

  ...tired for some reason.' And before she knew it, she was already fast asleep. She then woke up to find her in a dark space. There was nothing around her and it felt strange to be alone here for some reason. "Hello?" She called quietly. Nothing happened. "Is there anybody here? Where am I?" She called but this time, she got an answer from a voice that was awfully too familiar not to...

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  01/28/2015 9:28 PM ·Spoilers

  ...reconize. "What are you doing here in a place like this?" The voice asked. She looked all around but saw nothing. "W-what's going on? Show yourself!" She asked and what happened next shocked her. The person who answered was Black. He appeared in front of her. He wasn't burned like the last time she had saw him. He looked like his old self that seemed to be far away from her. Her eyes...

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  01/28/2015 9:34 PM ·Spoilers

  ...lit up at the sight of him alright. "I thought you were burned?" She asked him. All he did was shake his head. "You never show what happened after you died when you leave earth. I'm here because I want to tell you something." He finally said. She perked up. "What?" He took a deep breath. "I will come back but in a few weeks... It's just... taking a while." He said almost too quietly for...

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  01/28/2015 9:41 PM ·Spoilers

  ...her to hear. But, before she could say anything, he disappeared for some reason. "Wait! Don't go!" She said, but she was gone again. She woke up to find herself back under the cherry tree again at night. She got up went back towards the house. 'Is Black telling the truth? Is he really returning from the dead?'

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  01/28/2015 9:55 PM ·Spoilers

  [Chapter 7: A hero's return... Finale] One month has passed and Steel still hasn't heard anything from Black since his visit in her dream under the tree. Now she's starting to think he was lying. 'Why hasn't he come back yet? He said he would.' She said in her mind. She then decided to go for a walk to get her mind off of it. She had been out for only an hour before Eggman attacked the city...

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  01/28/2015 10:02 PM ·Spoilers

  ...and noticed he was headed her way. She tried to run, but a metal claw grabbed her. "Trying to escape are we?" The mad-scientist asked, a smirk appearing across his face. "Let me go!" She ordered him. "Hmm... How about no?" He said and just laughed. He was about to leave but something stopped him. "Where do you think you're going with her, Egg-head?" The familiar voice from her dream said...

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  01/28/2015 10:07 PM ·Spoilers

  "Ah! What are you doing here Black? I thought you were dead?!" The scientist asked, now shocked. He let his guard down for only one minute and Black kicked him, knocking him out. "Now, only one last thing to do." He smashes Eggman's machine, causing the claw to let go of Steel. She fell to the ground, landing on her feet. She was now tramatized by his sudden appearence. "What-? How-?" She...

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  01/28/2015 10:13 PM ·Spoilers

  ...tried but couldn't get the words out. "Remember what I said about me returning from the dead? It was true." He answered, knowing what she was gonna ask him. She now had no time to doubt him now. He kept his promise of returning. He was just about to walk away when she grabbed him into a big bear-hug. 'That's the Steel I know and love.' He said in his mind. He smiled, knowing that things...

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  01/28/2015 10:14 PM ·Spoilers

  ...were back to normal. THE END. (Ugh, finally finished with this. .-. I'll start a comic on FNAF tomorrow. Right now I'm tired.)

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  02/17/2015 7:15 PM ·Spoilers

  this story is really good u have a gift

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