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10/24/2015 7:17 PM ·Spoilers
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10/24/2015 7:27 PM ·Spoilers
I turn my back to her as well. "You sound like you know these woods better than I do, so I'll take your word for it." I take five steps forward, long strides that lengthen the distance between us. But with every step, the hairs on the back of my neck stick more and more upright. There are ants on my back, a chill that runs up and down my spine. (cont.)
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10/24/2015 7:28 PM ·Spoilers
No, it's not just a psychological thing. There really is a gentle breeze on the back of my neck. A soft wind. A... soft breath. I slowly turn my head. At the corner of my eye, I see a wooden-- "This is no place for weaklings." [end]
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10/24/2015 7:29 PM ·Spoilers
Aaaaand, made an error while copying and pasting. GG. Sorry for comment spam. On my own post.
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10/24/2015 7:31 PM ·Spoilers
fun story. interesting enough to make me wish i was in it. i honestly expected that ending, but not in the way you did it splatterai
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10/24/2015 7:33 PM ·Spoilers
@Tyler - Welllll, I didn't want to go beyond that point because of Miiverse, but after that, she eats the narrator. Nana is a cannibal. Not a magical creature or demon or vampire or anything. Just a straight up cannibal. But she's so cute tho kdfjlsdjflsd Thank you~
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10/24/2015 7:35 PM ·Spoilers
@Michael - It makes this comment section seem smaller, for easier scrolling. And not everybody wants to read my garbage, uhuhuhu. Some probably just want to comment.
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10/24/2015 8:31 PM ·Spoilers
That... was frickin' awesome. I really got immersed in that. As a person who knows what good writing is, I declare this to be one of the best things I've read. And believe me, that's saying something.
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10/24/2015 9:58 PM ·Spoilers
YES. JUST YES. More of your characters, and some of your writing! I really liked your story. I can't wait to read your novels if you publish them! ;)
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10/24/2015 10:13 PM ·Spoilers
@Blue - Oh, really? :U Thank you. ;-; Some parts read out a little weird to me, so I wasn't sure if it was good. But I appreciate it so much. OTL @Andy - It's a trick some people use on forums outside of Miiverse, where they use the spoiler tags to minimize large posts and make them appear smaller for easier page navigation. I didn't like how huge the page looked without spoiler tags
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10/24/2015 10:22 PM ·Spoilers
@Splatterai: Wow! You, mi'lady, are the queen of suspense! It really absorbs the reader. I really hope to see more!
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10/24/2015 10:29 PM ·Spoilers
@Alex - Yeeee, thank youuuu. I always fancied myself a writer with a dark style, but this right here was the first time I actually had the opportunity to write about something dark, so I felt pretty clumsy going in. x') I was just winging it. ._. Glad to hear it turned out okay!
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10/24/2015 10:34 PM ·Spoilers
you gotta love that dark stuff: dark coffoe dark humor dark story telling dark choclate dark type pokemon dark tenacle of darkness makes you wonder if there's something better, ahem ahem undertale ahem!
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