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04/16/2016 9:44 PM ·Spoilers

The humid air added onto the horrid heat, making it dreadful for whoever stepped foot outside. The sun looked down upon anything on the ground, causing everything hot to the touch. The recent rain caused puddles to decorate the ground, and making the ground muddy. Even through the horrid conditions, the sound of birds could be heard, creating endless echos.--

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  • The skin on your elbows and knees were red from all the harsh rubbing. Stray hairs stuck to your face from all your sweat, but you couldn't care less. After running for awhile, you finally stopped at a large tree. You pressed your back against it, feeling the ruff bark rub on it. You took you weapon off of your belt, and added a small amount of ammunition. You tried your best to calm your--

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  • ragged breaths, but had no avail. Looking over your shoulder, you scanned the area for anything... or anyone. Finding nothing, you turned to walk away. But you found yourself looking straight at a weapon. "Make a sound, and you'll regret it." He spat, his eyes piercing into yours. Your eyes widened, but you kept your mouth shut. After raising your hands in defeat, you kicked the weapon out of-

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  • Notifications?

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  • Well, this is interesting. Well-written so far, to say the least. Notifications!

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  • This is really cool so far!

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  • his hands, and earning a gruff yell in the process. You scrambled for cover, knowing he would regain his stance soon. You could hear him adding more ammunition, so you looked for your weapon... But you dropped it in the process. You looked over the fallen tree, looking for the man who came after you... But you found nothing. But that didn't help. It was more horrifying to not know where--

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  • he was, than to know he was. After scanning the area many times, you stood up, but gritted your teeth. A severe pain was coming from your ankle. You looked down and saw a large cut, you touched it, but quickly withdrew your hand. It hurt even when it had the slightest contact. But you couldn't worry about that now, you searched the ground, and finally found your weapon laying in the mud.-

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  • You picked it up, not even caring how messy your hands have become. As you leaned down, a large amount of your ammunition spilled across the ground. A large snarl grew on your lips as you tried your best to pick them all up. The rustling of leaves could be heard, and it was unnatural. You froze. Slowly raising yourself, you made sure your weapon was ready. You scanned the area and saw-

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  • A good amount of people surrounding you. "Well this is fantastic..." You muttered. "Be quiet!" One of them snapped, he looked familiar... He was the same one from before. "Drop your weapon." He ordered, making your eyes narrow. After waiting a few seconds, you proceeded to drop your weapon. A grin grew on his lips, showing his teeth. "You don't know how long I've been waiting for-

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  • this." He said through his smirk. He started to walk towards you, fear began to take over as you backed away. But again you felt the familiar ruff bark of a tree. Your enemy looked straight at you, bring up his weapon. "Gotcha." He said in a mocking tone, causing you to squeeze your eyes shut. Soon enough you felt a blast to the face. "Hey! You sprayed me right in the face!" You-

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  • yelled, the cold water making your clothes stick to your body. "Isn't that the point of the game? To get you?" He remarked, little chuckles making him pause time to time. "You cornered me, and drenched me in water!" You protested. He gave you a questioning look, but helped you back to your feet. "Well, I win. So that means you have to do the ice bucket challenge!" He said proudly.-

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  • "Well, I couldn't get more wet." You said, pushing him into the mud. "HAHA! I SHALL GET THE LAST LAUGH!" End.

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  • XP That was hilarious. But, uh, what kinda ammunition for a water squirter could you pick up after spilling?

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  • Thanks. :3 Well, I pondered on that for a few minutes and decided to do that, since it would have given away the "surprise." So just pretend that the laws of physics don't exist. xD

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  • Minus 10 points Don't write stories in second person

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  • Still good though

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  • Why? You forgot a period. :^)

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  • Does that upset you

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  • Because leaving out a question mark upset me. Also, neither of those we're complete sentences. They don't deserve periods.

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  • Yes, but not horribly. Whhhhhhyyyyyyy.

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