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07/30/2014 9:46 PM ·Spoilers

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  • Along time ago, there were two brothers. The eldest cast the light as the youngest cast the dark. They lived one with each other and fell in harmony. They were made to protect each other and were made as a little family.

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  • The light wielder, ruler of light, is named Luner. The dark wielder, ruler of darkness is named Mephiles. They were hedghogs, however, they weren't normal ones. They possess power like no other, a gift that God gave them.

    Yeahs1
  • But then, One day, they were captured and were taken to the solean people were they sat there force to see what will happen to them...Thats were, things all changed....

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  • It was night. The wings were cold, The clouds moved in, and the stars shown there gorgeous lights of hevean. The people of Solean were all asleep...Acept, the Duke and the cold, hungry brothers that wimpered in need of aid. Mephiles looked up at his older brother Luner and asked, "Brother? What are we doing here?Were are we anyway?" Luner looked down weakly at his younger brother.

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  • mephiles had black fur easily blending within there surroundings and had bright blue eyes that pierced the dark. He had a little blood from the fight they had lost on his head and at the cornor of his mouth. He even had a bruse that formed atop of his brow. Luner stared at his brother thinking what to say,"Honestly brother i dont know but i will make sure your safe.... Got it?"

    Yeahs1
  • Luner looked back and gave his brother a warm hearted smile. Mephiles was a little scared at first but saw his brother smileing in confidence."Got it!"Mephiles proudly said as Luner ruffed Mephiles hair a little. Theres my Dark wolf of the night. Luner was all white with grey like stripes that seem to fade in black. He had blue eyes too similar to his brothers.He had scars from the fight earlyer.

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  • Then, Luner heared foot steps aproching the celier. He stayed on gaurd as he heard them echoing through the empty halls.Mephiles clenched his brother's waist and looked away,not wanting to see the monster who did this to them. Luner then saw a figure lookeing from outside of the celier. He had his arms hideing behind him as his glasses reflect the dim moon light from the windows.

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  • The man then smiled and said,"Hello there my little keys of hope. I am pleased to see that you are doing well! I am the Duke of Solean at your service." He bowed slightly then shot up in excitement."Me and my assistances need you two to work your powers and help us with our experiment. Can you do that for us please?" Luner went into a low growl as his hairs stood on ends.His ears layed back.

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  • The Duke looked disapointed. He then shook his head."You shouldnt say that Light wielder..." As the man smiled, there appeared Three men wearing robes with hoods.It was hard to see there faces.They came to the icy steal bars and opened the ceiler door to come and force the two to get up.Luner then shot up trying to block them away from Mephiles.Mephiles was too scared to move and froze.

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  • "Run Mephiles!" Luner yelled as he blasted another light aura at them.Mephiles panicked.He snaped out of it and dashed for the exit.He was then wacked by a lead pipe.Mephiles fell rock bottom to the floor nocked out.Luner then cried,"Mephiles!" As he pushed one of the hooded men down another shoked him in the chest with a electric pipe. Luner fell still weak from before.

    Yeahs1
  • Luner then got up and started running towards Mephiles still yelling,"Mephiles get up!Dont do this!" Luner gets shoked aging this time at the side.Luner screams in pain as his whole side absorb the whole shock.He then started crawing towards his brother, desperately wanting him."Brother....Wake up!Please!"His voice cracked as another swift hit of the shock stung Luners back.

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  • Luner's spine then begin to twitch and burn as the shock begin to go up and down his body.The people and hedghogs that were in there own ceilers could only watch in horro as they saw Luner try to make one final etemp to get to mephiles.The Duke then grab the Electric pipe from The hooded man and slung it as hard as he can to Luners head.Everything went black.

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  • Ok u guys that is it for the first chapter and i hope u like it. I know i made errors to the story like the spelling and gramer but its because the 3Ds XD. so any way tell me if you want me to make part two and i will do that! :3 but tell then chow and see u later! :3

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    07/31/2014 12:52 PM ·Spoilers

    the first chapter, i feel alot bad for, but i love it [a little bit of tears came out of my eyes]

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