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01/25/2014 9:31 PM ·Spoilers

"The Gengar" chapter 9: A Trainer's Bond [PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT UNTIL CHAPTER IS COMPLETE]

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/26/2014 9:30 PM ·Spoilers

    "Bad guys", mumbled a half-awake Evan. "The Trainer School was set on fire, and some Pokémon were stolen...", informed Officer Theodore, Jane's uncle. "Who could have done such a thing?", asked Jane.

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/26/2014 9:43 PM ·Spoilers

    "We have some in mind, but one suspect is right here." Officer Theodore walked up to Cassie. Nobody understood at first, but Cassie's mother, Lynn, cried out. "Cassie Norwood, you're under arrest."

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/26/2014 9:43 PM ·Spoilers

    [CHAPTER COMPLETE]

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  • AK-Doug

    01/26/2014 11:52 PM ·Spoilers

    GASP 0o0

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  • AK-Doug

    01/26/2014 11:53 PM ·Spoilers

    This is awesome, Panda! Keep writin' :D

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/27/2014 1:39 AM ·Spoilers

    Thank you xD I might have subconsciously gotten some crime-drama inspiration from your story, haha

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 1:51 AM ·Spoilers

    Aww that's cool. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter, the story's incredible, as you probably know :D

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/27/2014 2:33 AM ·Spoilers

    Thanks «3 Can I get some opinions from a fellow writer? Not only criticism, but maybe your favorite character, chapter, etc xD I'm curious, hehe

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 8:18 AM ·Spoilers

    Well my favorite chapter is probably Ghosts. All the imagery is beautiful and you gave it a really cool atmosphere.

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 8:21 AM ·Spoilers

    And my favorite character is Violenta. I really love how she comes off as this sassy queen of the forest. It's exceptional writing :)

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 8:25 AM ·Spoilers

    And I don't think there's much criticism to give, your story's just that awesome. Your characters are all top notch, your dialogue is awesome, and the imagery and symbolism are just... wow.

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 8:26 AM ·Spoilers

    Your job as a storyteller is to completely immerse the reader, and you've done it perfectly. It's superb work. Great job, Panda :D

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/27/2014 3:42 PM ·Spoilers

    Gosh, that makes me so happy xD I mean, you know, I'm also writing this on here for practice. I actually want to write my first book this summer, & I guess I'm good enough from what I hear : 3

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/27/2014 3:44 PM ·Spoilers

    You even got that Violenta is the queen : D I mean, it isn't hard to figure out, but thankfully I structured it properly!

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  • Ev

    01/27/2014 7:03 PM ·Spoilers

    i totally agree with the man you really are great and your story is just so interesting im really excited for you its just great

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 7:23 PM ·Spoilers

    So tell me what you think of mine :D I don't really have chapters, just the parts but are there any scenes or other little things that stood out to you? I really wanna hear from you, too.

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  • Brad

    01/27/2014 7:46 PM ·Spoilers

    I love arceus

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  • Diana

    01/27/2014 8:47 PM ·Spoilers

    Dem Cliffhangers xD I must read more!!

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  • Panda ºωº

    01/27/2014 10:36 PM ·Spoilers

    Well, I still need to read the 3rd part δoug but you performed an AMAZING action scene in part 2. The whole story is really great, & I will get back to you when I finish : 3

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  • AK-Doug

    01/27/2014 11:00 PM ·Spoilers

    Cool, alright Panda :D

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