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03/12/2014 10:01 PM ·Spoilers

look in comments for a random sweet story-thing i thought up! plz don't comment till end tho...

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  • once, i met a young boy. he was odd, and rarely spoke, but he would speak to me every day, only he wouldn't start a conversation, he would say some cheesy motivational quote, like from a poster.

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  • he would always just run up to me out of nowhere, no matter where i was. he'd whisper his quote in my ear, and then dash away, disappearing. he did this for about 2 weeks, only once a day.

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  • after the 2 weeks had passed, it became a routine, until one sunny wednsday, when he appeared, gave me the quote, but for the first time, added something different to the ending.

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  • he said, 'tomorrow will be my last day', then disappeared. the next day, he appeared during my lunch break, and actually spoke like a child of his age would. 'can we go to the park?' he asked.

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  • i nodded, then let him gently drag me all the way to a small park in the center of the city. we sat together, and he suddenly looked sad. 'my mommy... died here...' he said. i squeezed his hand.

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  • he suddenly felt like ice, 'she was always sad like you were' he said. my eyes widened, because before he had appeared weeks before, i had been suffering from severe depression. i wondered how he knew

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  • 'i saw how sad you were, and so i tried to cheer you up each day by saying something nice' the boy looked up at me, his face was red, he was crying.'but now, that i can go with mommy, what about you?'

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  • he kept crying, i couldn't figure out what he meant, but then it hit me like a train. a boy's body had been found 2 days ago, he had died in the harsh winter cold. it was the same boy, a ghost.

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  • i was stunned, but i knew what to do. i pulled him close and hugged him, he buried his face in my sweater. he must have read my thoughts, because he sniffed and said, 'really? you'll be okay alone?'

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  • he looked up at me, his face like a tomato. 'you won't die like mommy?' i smiled, my first real smile in almost a year, and nodded. he smiled a little too, and hugged me again.

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  • i didn't wan't that moment to end, but i had to turn around when something softly brushed against my shoulder. i turned around, to find a beautiful young woman standing behind me. the boy saw her too.

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  • the boy yelled 'momma!' and ran to hug the woman. tears ran down her cheek, and she looked up at me again. she mouthed the words 'thank you' in an invisible voice, taking the boy's hand in hers.

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  • they turned around, the boy yelling 'thanks so much' to me and waving, and started walking to the park's entrance. as they reached the entry-way, the boy's voice softly disappeared.

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  • mother and child's figures slowly faded away, replaced by the faintest glow of a faraway light. i couldn't find any word to say, so i simply mouthed the words:

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  • ok, i'm done, plz comment ur opinions!

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  • *starts crying like a baby* This does not make any sense but it does...

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  • i know, just randomly thought it up, i can explain it if you'd like... ;~;

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