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07/09/2017 6:08 PM ·Spoilers

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Finally finished!! I was wondering, if some people would be willing, to give me an art critique!!

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  • •Evy•

    07/09/2017 6:09 PM ·Spoilers

    Not just this picture, but my art in general. Also, please don't comment stuff like, "Your art is already good!!1!", cause i want critique, not just complements, 😗👏 Thanks very much, muchacho.

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  • Buisy

    07/09/2017 6:22 PM ·Spoilers

    maybe you should try to have the faces more aligned to the actual structure of the head, and the armpit on one of the characters looks off, but other than that I think this is a pretty good drawing, I like it .u.

    Yeahs2

  • •Evy•

    07/09/2017 6:23 PM ·Spoilers

    Aaa,, i see what you're talking about,, i will have to work on that!:0 Thank you very much :)

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  • Buisy

    07/09/2017 6:27 PM ·Spoilers

    no problem .u.)/

    Yeahs2

  • Q

    07/09/2017 6:34 PM ·Spoilers

    It's super awesome! :D I don't have the game though :T

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  • •Evy•

    07/09/2017 6:36 PM ·Spoilers

    Thanks. Its good game, but not very popular, so im not surprised, xP

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  • Pumptin

    07/09/2017 6:38 PM ·Spoilers

    You have a nice to look at and unique style. But sometimes it looks like the neck is non-existant. Pinky on the right there is a perfect example.

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  • •Evy•

    07/09/2017 6:43 PM ·Spoilers

    Thank you! You are very right :0 i should definitely work on that, lol. Poor girl probably cant even swallow with that neck. xD And thank you again! :))

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  • Chrisi

    07/10/2017 4:35 AM ·Spoilers

    It's always hard to critique something stylized... (but anatomy is always something one can improve on ;3) You could play a bit more with lighting ^-^ Also: I like the colors and love how expressive the characters are! However, the piece lacks a bit of composition, something that guides the viewer over the artwork. There are a lot of tutorials on youtube on it if you're interested :')

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  • Alfredo

    07/10/2017 6:20 AM ·Spoilers

    OMG I love your art style!!!

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  • •Evy•

    07/12/2017 10:22 PM ·Spoilers

    @Chirsi. Ahh, yes. Anatomy is always something to be improved upon! Lol. I get lost with lighting a lot,, so i definitely need to work on it. Composition is something i have a lot of trouble with, i should really look up a tutorial xD Thank you :)) @Alfredo. Thank you very much!! :)

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  • Chrisi

    07/13/2017 11:22 AM ·Spoilers

    @•Evelyn• Glad I was of help to you! Also: Don't feel bad if you struggle with anything, art is incredibly hard and even the most skilled artist still struggle^^

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