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08/17/2017 2:41 AM ·Spoilers

小４だけどどうかな？アドバイス&点数よろしく！

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もう少し、りんかくを丸くした方がいいですよ　！

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線が少し雑にみえます。重ねない方がいいと思います。髪の毛は、もう少し大まかに、書いた方が… 口出しすみません！

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顎の形をととのえましょう。目はもう少し小さくてもいいと思います。鼻は顔の中心部を意識しながら形をととのえましょう。髪は大まかに。頑張ってください(^^) だからといって自分がうまいわけではありませんが(笑)

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