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09/28/2017 10:26 AM ·Spoilers

Open Closed

Part 23

This has got to be one of the longest RP's on here

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  • Jaz

    10/06/2017 2:44 PM ·Spoilers

    "Are you sure you'll be ok dear?" She asks glancing at Max before turning her attention back to Robin, holding his hand softly a frightened and tired look in her eyes

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  • Anti stepped his foot on the ground impatiently. Ice came out from under it and froze the ground around them. "Max! I can't feel his presence. Even if he is in limbo! That means he's..." Anti said. Mark cut him off. "Anti. Your overreacting. Max, I'll hold the cape for you. Go down and check" Mark said, putting Jack's body on the frozen ground and went to hold Max's cape. He grasped it tightly.

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  • "Thanks Mark and I'm pretty sure I'll be okay..." 'pretty sure...' She jumped back into the void and immediately felt the clean oxygen leave her lungs and she breathed slowly. Here she goes again... "J-JACK?!" She shouted loudly as she began to make her way further down, her cape becoming longer and stretching in an odd way. She hoped he was okay, she knew he had to be okay.

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  • Suddenly, Jack's body vanished from the frozen ground. Mark stared at the place where it vanished, still clutching Max's cloak. ••• Jack tried to call out. He felt like a cloth was being clamped over his nose, allowing little breath for him. "M-Max?" Jack called out weakly. He wanted to fall asleep. But he kept his eyes open.

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  • He rests on a tree as he then starts to look in his bag and sees his pictures of his family and starts to regain some of his memory back. "W-woah... This is my family... The one i used to has as a child... And I used to lived in the forest... But who am i?... I know my family but who am i supposed to be.. or was at least?"

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  • "Max... i-is that you?" Jack called out again, feeling energy drain from him.

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  • Then he askes Mark and Sparrow. "Who are you people? AND WHO AM I!? WHAT AM I?! WHERE AM I!?" He yells in confusion and worry at them.

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  • Mark sighed. "You used to know us... Richard" He said. "You di3d horribly. Max had to take you to the "Altar" and revive you there. She did manage to revive you but... you forgot about us" Mark explained, still holding on to Max's cloak.

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  • "M-my name is Richard? and... I d-d13d and then was revived by my guardian I know as Maximus Quinn but you refer to Max and I have amensia..? Wait a second now..." He starts to remember a little bit more from before he was revived and a lil bit more of what happened. "Your Mark arent you? and theres also Jack,Sparrow,Lil Max,Alex,Max,Robin,Hero,and me?.."

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  • "Yes" Mark said. He peered inside the cloak a little, not putting his head inside. 'What's taking so long? Did Max find him' Mark thought.

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  • "Oh my god.... This may sound probably not too crazy or so but Im starting to get some of my memory back... Just dont have all of them... yet! I dont remember who i am for sure,my family,and my siblings if I ever had some of course.... Meh.."

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  • "I thought you were born in a forest? Just having a little sister?" He asked, wanting to push away the bad thoughts in his mind.

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  • "Oh wait I was?" Then he remembered. "Oh yeah... I was born in a forest but with my family in a lob cabin.."

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  • Jaz

    10/08/2017 3:19 AM ·Spoilers

    "Boyo I really don't think I'll be much help, we've never met but could you keep quiet please." Sparrow says to Richard, but keeps her concentration on Robin "but as a doctor I don't think you have amnesia, I think you just forgot things, your brain is having to recreate the electrical pattern of those memories after dy!ng by the sounds of it though you didn't completely di3 so your memory should

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  • Jaz

    10/08/2017 3:23 AM ·Spoilers

    Come back to you shortly" she explains somewhat harshly without patients. Robin's eyes moved under his eyelids, he winced dy!ng numerous times was starting to catch up with him

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  • "Oh... okay.. and I understand.. now.." His memory starts to come back more and rests on a tree for a while. "Zzz... zzz... zzz..."

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  • The young man surveyed Robin curiously. "He has di3d alot" He said, it wasn't a question; it was a statement. "His lungs are hurting. Do you want me to do the same procedure as I did for Mister Jack?" The young man asked Sparrow. "The procedure works for the lungs too. I just have a different potion for it" He explained.

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  • Richard continues resting by the tree thats by the group and is exhausted. "Zzz... zzz... zzz..."

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  • Jaz

    10/08/2017 4:31 PM ·Spoilers

    Sparrow shook her head "No, I don't think it's the lungs which is the problem" she mutters with a sigh looking at the young man "He's...he's di3d a lot as you said, more times than any human even more than some supernatural and that's not counting his many other lives. He's older than this kingdom, his soul is tired and forgotten yet he keeps fighting, every time and for what. his only gift seems

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  • Jaz

    10/08/2017 4:35 PM ·Spoilers

    d3ath, a few years of peace before he is reborn again!" Sparrow burst out, her eyes go wide when she realises that she was shouting, she flushes embarrassed, looking away back at Robin "He should have di3d all those years ago, he put up as good as fight as any hero....but a part of me says no, I know i'm being selfish for keeping him to this world but I....." she shakes her head "...he just needs

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