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10/17/2017 8:48 PM ·Spoilers

Hi guys! Some of you may know that I LOVE to write stories. So I'm gonna share a small part of one of my stories with you in the comments.

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/17/2017 8:52 PM ·Spoilers

    "Open this door!!!!" I hear the man yell from outside. He rattles the doorknob so loudly I thought he would break it. I run around the house to find a spot to hide, my heart beating louder than ever. Should I hide in the closet? No, he'll find me. Under my bed? No. In the dresser? No, I can't even fit in there! I panic. What should I do?! I hear the man сυrςε. "OPEN THIS DOOR!!!!!!" (cont.)

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/17/2017 8:56 PM ·Spoilers

    He yells again. I continue running around the house. Suddenly, I come across a giant hole in the middle of my bathroom. Whare did this come from? 'Should I jump in?' I ask myself. No, that's insane. I could κιll myself! I think again. Well... it's the only chance I've got. I hear the front door slam open, and jump in. I open my eyes. Where am I?

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/17/2017 9:03 PM ·Spoilers

    So... yeah... That's one of the stories I've been writing. It's called The Hole. So... you probably have NO idea what's happening in it, but that's how I like to begin my books. So that the reader has NO idea what's happening until later. So... do you guys like it? Feel free to give me criticism, compliments, whatever. But don't say anything TOO mean. You can even continue my story if you like.

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  • GreatSoFar

    10/17/2017 9:23 PM ·Spoilers

    It is amazing! I personally hate writing, but I still get good grades in writing. I love to read though!

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  • Zorhax

    10/17/2017 9:30 PM ·Spoilers

    Really cool! I like how the reader doesn’t know what’s going on until later!

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/17/2017 9:36 PM ·Spoilers

    Wow... uh... thanks!

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  • Susanna

    10/17/2017 11:08 PM ·Spoilers

    That's so cool! It seems good so far. I liked writing short stories a lot when I was younger, but I don't do it that much nowadays. I hope when you write more, you'll put it on MV! :D

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  • »—Nικο—›

    10/17/2017 11:20 PM ·Spoilers

    I loved it Alli! That suspense though XD Please make pt. 2 soon i'm hooked °~° lel

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/17/2017 11:35 PM ·Spoilers

    @Niko, sorry. XD I love cliff-hangers. @Everyone, wow... I didn't expect you guys to like my writing this much! Maybe I'll post stories more often.

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/17/2017 11:41 PM ·Spoilers

    Random thing I feel like saying: I started writing stories near the end of 5th grade. My first story was called "Alice and the Dance Competition." I swear it is SOOOO cringy! XDD A lot of the parts don't even make sense!

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  • εsmε

    10/18/2017 1:26 PM ·Spoilers

    This is really good, Alli! I enjoy the suspense it brings. I started writing a story a while back, but I haven't worked on it in a while. I usually wait untill I have a sudden burst of inspiration, write two pages, then have a total brain f@rt and ditch it for a few months. XD You are vary talented though, I can tell through your writing that you thoroughly enjoy what you do. ;)

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  • hugo

    10/18/2017 1:52 PM ·Spoilers

    PLEASE MAKE A PART 2 IT IS AMAZING ALSO IT REMINDS ME OF HOME ALONE!!!!!

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/18/2017 4:15 PM ·Spoilers

    @Esme, I used to be like that. Now I write a few pages every day.

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  • ♪Tγ-Tγ★

    10/18/2017 5:00 PM ·Spoilers

    Great story so far! I used to have one that I read, and there's one I need to finish. But this is way better!

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  • RMVMatthew

    10/18/2017 8:18 PM ·Spoilers

    very nice the details keep the flow of the story going and the suspense wants me reading more. personolly my teachers have told me that im a very "talented" writer but idk about that XD in 4th grade my teacher read one of my stories to the whole class and my poem in 3rd grade got i the front cover on my "best 3rd grade poems" (i should write more XD)

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  • ★~Potato~★

    10/19/2017 9:57 PM ·Spoilers

    The Story Gives Me The Feeling Of The Lost Trails. One Of My Books, Has 30 Books ALREADY, And The Plot Is About A Girl Who Stays In A Mansion, From The Victorian Era, And It's INFESTED With Ghosts. In Her Backyard, There's A Creepy Hidden Trail; That Her Parents Didn't Know About. Once She Took A Step In, She Looked Back, There's NOTHING But Trees. Lol I Got Halloween Stories. :]

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  • ★~αllι~★

    10/19/2017 10:17 PM ·Spoilers

    @Potato, I would LOVE that book. Scary books are the best!

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  • ★~Potato~★

    10/20/2017 2:55 PM ·Spoilers

    @Alli: Thanks! •ω•

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  • Evanchu ШЩ

    10/20/2017 4:02 PM ·Spoilers

    alli you're a writer too??? :O omg! i start some of my stories that way, too.

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