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10/19/2017 8:22 PM ·Spoilers

Chapter 2: Zoete (Continuation of my story "The Hole" I posted a couple days ago) I look all around me. The walls are completely black. I notice a small door just about the size to crawl through. Ah, I get it. I must be dreaming. I begin to close my eyes, but then I look back at the door. Hmm. Should I open it? I don't see why not. I slowly open the door, and crawl through. 'Whoa...' (cont.)

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  • I whisper to myself. This time the walls of the room are not black at all, instead they are completely white! There are doors everywhere (normal-sized ones this time)! As I start to open one of them, I feel something grab my shoulders. "Aah!" I yell, turning around quickly. There stands a girl just around my age with... uh... green skin? "Who are you?" I ask. "You are not supposed to be (cont.)

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  • here!" She says. "What?" She pushes me back into the pitch-black room I came from, and slams the small door behind us. "...So... who are you?" I repeat. "My name is Zoete." "...And?" "...And what?" "Last name?" "...Um... what's a last name?" Hmm. Must be some kind of joke. "Uhh... Forget last names. My name's Anna James." I reach out my arm to shake hands. But Zoete does not reach her hand (cont.)

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  • out. Instead, she just stares blankly at my arm. "...Umm... hi?" She says at last. We stay silent for a moment. "...Soo... question: No offense, but... why is your skin... er... green?" "...Uh... because I was born that way?" "...Um... Okay..." Suddenly her eyes grow big. "I have to get you out of here!" "W--why?" Zoete waves her hand in the air, and a giant picture appears on the wall. (cont.)

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  • Wait-- is that a picture of... my house? Suddenly I remember everything. The man trying to break into my house, the hole I jumped into--everything. "Go inside the picture." Zoete says. "I--I can't." "Just walk inside." She says calmly. "It's easy." "No, seriously, I can't!" "Just trust me." "No, I CAN'T!! He's trying to get me!!!! He's trying to--" Before I can say another word, she pushes (cont.)

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  • me into the picture. All of a sudden, I'm back in my house. "ANNA, WHERE ARE YOU?!" A familiar voice yells. I hear loud footsteps. Oh my gosh. I have to get out of here! I gasp. The hole... THE HOLE!! Where is it?! I look all around me, and spot it. Oh, thank God! I jump in just like I did before.

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  • I hope you guys like Chapter 2 of my story! Stay tuned for Chapter 3, which I'll post in a couple days!

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  • LOVED IT! I Have A Story Called The Lost Trails (Long As Harry Potter Books). Reminds Me Of Alice In Wonderland! :]

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  • What a cliff-hanger! (great story!)

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  • You are good at this! You deserve so much support for this story.

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  • Now I wanna write a story...

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  • Aw! So good! I can't wait for Chapter 3! :D

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  • WAY better than my stories... you were born a writer!

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  • This is really good, Alli! Keep up the great work.

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  • @Maddy Katy, I'm sure your stories are great!

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  • Rlly.... I hvent finished my MK7 one... I'd better do that... no pics will be posted though

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  • Hey guys! I posted Chapter 3 just now if anyone wants to read it!

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