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07/28/2016 7:21 PM ·Spoilers

I going to tell a story i have been holding in for three years without almost anyone i know knowing.

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 7:29 PM ·Spoilers

    Five years ago when i was in fourth grade i was like everyone else in my grade,mentally corrupted and easily tricked to believe anything. It might not have been everyone, it might only have been me, something i only want God to answer. As school went on, I kept getting into trouble and what i mean trouble i mean in school suspension kind of trouble.

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 7:37 PM ·Spoilers

    As the one-hundred-and-eightyeth-day was over came summer, where i met two friends who didnt help me much at all. The were more jerks than they were even friends and i wasnt any more different than them. Then came one day when i came across someone i couldnt help but want to know among the poor, her name was Maril.

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    07/28/2016 7:38 PM ·Spoilers

    HER OH SNAP ITS A SHE IS SHE PRETTY!!

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 7:44 PM ·Spoilers

    When i first met maril, my "friends" brought more of their "friends" over to a sleep over at their house. It was kind of weird that everyone got their before noon and i was one of them. Then the reason was clear, they thought that just hanging out playing cod all night eating pizza and inhaling caffine like drugs wasnt enough so they decided to bully the kids in the cheap apartment neighborhoods.

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 7:53 PM ·Spoilers

    When it comes to my jerk friends and their jerk friends they had three things in common: when they prank, they dont just ding-dong-ditch or say that God told them to tell you that you were going to die within thirty seconds they had things like firecrackers but not like any ones you would use on the fourth of july they small but powerful ones to and could even be used in combat, the second thing

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 7:58 PM ·Spoilers

    that they had in common was that they had favorites and the third thing that they all had in common was that I was their least favorite. So as i said in a way, they went chasing all those little squeakers until they ran home. At first it was pretty funny for a person with dark enough humor, then they had younger kids in their sights and they used up more and more of those painful little bombs on

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:04 PM ·Spoilers

    those misfortunate children until it got boring to them with still some leftover painful little firecrackers. Until they had their sights on one more person, a girl about up to my neck in height which they carelessly mistaken to be a target. I tried to talk them out of doing it but they just taunted me for bringing up that idea. And without a doubt, it was a terrible mistake for ignoring me

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:16 PM ·Spoilers

    When the firecracker hit the ground, before it even bursted into thousands of painful ember she responded with a tone of unbelievable anger that could even match our parents "OOH, JUST BECAUSE IM A LITTLE GIRL YOU THINK YOU CAN TICK ME OFF AND GET AWAY WITH IT"? [she said other things than girl and tick but that is something i should just leave to your imagionation], and with that the firecracker

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:23 PM ·Spoilers

    exploded leaving the black ash making almost half of a complete circle covered half of her body. The most bewildering part was that she didnt even flinch and she saw and heard everything we were doing including what i said and she showed no hesitation to confront us with this. Then she started to slowly walk towards my group jerks, and as me being their least favorite they shoved me towards her

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:29 PM ·Spoilers

    face and they lied that i agreed to beat her up which made her even more enraged now growling with anger that could convince a savage pitbull to run away but the brains of the friends i had were a whole lot smaller than a pitbulls and their lies were no smarter than one either for how frail and cowardly i WAS.

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:39 PM ·Spoilers

    She gently nudged me aside and i came toppling over slamming me into a set of prickly bushes The group was horrified and by then she backed them all into a corner. Then, they went super stubborn and hurdled countles punches at her. For some reason she wasnt fighting back and it wasnt clear if she really was or wasnt due to that i was burried deep within the bushes to where i couldnt break free

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:46 PM ·Spoilers

    and the prickly leaves were piercing into my arms to the point where it would hurt to much to move. Then i heard everyone screaming and fast stomping footsteps in the ground that soon quieted to nothingness. Then i remember me opening my eyes up to to her staring into mine. Then she said with a calm and soft voice "are you okay"? I was no different from the rest of my friends despite that i hurt

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 8:49 PM ·Spoilers

    nobody but i didnt run away. I felt different now, i felt as old as i was when the story ended. I did not respond and i will never remember her face, she helped me out of the bushes and all i did was walked away with silence.

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  • Detroit

    07/28/2016 9:05 PM ·Spoilers

    i could end the story now but im going to continue it when i delete this comment.

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