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ShiraMihla-angelic
08/07/2016 3:43 AM ·Spoilers
Been lifting lots of heavy furniture for past few days, tired, how about some critique of my art?
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08/07/2016 3:47 AM ·Spoilers
When i say critique, i mean heavy critique, (note, i'm not phased in the least bit by insults or anything of the such, so don't worry about that, just be wary of miiverse.) I want to know from you as an individual what you think i can improve on and what i'm good & bad at. My limbs hurt... carrying funiture upstairs takes it's tolls...
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08/07/2016 4:06 AM ·Spoilers
Hope ya rest up and feel better! I think you actually do really well with characters. That lewmy drawing is quite impressive. You know you take alot on so I think my critique for you is thag I would like to see a few more complete drawings. One fully colored, shaded with background and objects! Super challenge! XD
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08/07/2016 4:07 AM ·Spoilers
I scrolled through a good amount of your profile and you definitely got talent. I just wanna see what else you can do beyond good character drawing. It is what I wanna work on myself too.
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08/07/2016 11:47 AM ·Spoilers
Moving is one of life's little gifts. The biggest thing in my opinion is how spartan your coloring is. Your outlines are great, but it needs some extra effects to make it pop. This is really a nitpick, but your characters mostly have the same body-type with the exception of chest size. It's really not a problem for me, I just happened to notice it.
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08/08/2016 3:57 PM ·Spoilers
Xander> I suck at backgrounds and objects! :D And umm, i don't think... i have any other drawing talents other than characters... oh dear... p-p TinMan> Extra what tho? what could possible make my work pop out more, i need to know... I... i didn't even realize i drew the same body type, in my head at least they look far different from eachother, but on paper(Or screen in this case.)not so much..
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08/08/2016 4:03 PM ·Spoilers
It's fine! I'm terrible at it too! XD I been looking at an old anime called City Hunter and they make city backgrounds look sooo good! Part of me says "It is just squares and lights!" another part says "If I can see it...Why can't I make it look as good?!" XD I am gonna be try since I have Disney AA. Maybe some test sketches soon.
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08/08/2016 4:08 PM ·Spoilers
Maybe i'll try something similar, i mean ya havta start somewhere, before you can be good at something you must be bad at it first. TvT
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08/08/2016 4:18 PM ·Spoilers
That's the spirit! Or...You have one of those uncanny knacks for it and everyone who tries hates you! XD But ya, you gotta start somewhere. It may take more effort but I can see in your work you have the ability to pick it up. :)
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08/08/2016 4:33 PM ·Spoilers
*Shrug* You don't have to take it to heart if you're confident. I'm definitely not the end-all/be-all here. Something I learned was that lining parts of the insides with a lighter or darker color gives certain things a nice texture, if that makes sense. Just a subtle add-on to shading and lighting.
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08/08/2016 4:38 PM ·Spoilers
Things like what? (I'll pretend this is your old Q & A post now)
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08/08/2016 4:38 PM ·Spoilers
Xander> except backgrounds... T_T TinMen> I know, i just wish i could get more critism from more than just 2 people... And i think? i get what you mean. (Emphasize on the think.) i'll try things out and see what i can make of it.
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08/08/2016 4:44 PM ·Spoilers
There's a few of tricks I know, but since our styles are very different it's hard to say if certain tricks would work for you. Really, it'd be easier to ask what you want to know rather than for someone to suggest what might work. I know, people are afraid of hurtin' your feelings or they have no idea how to give criticism and don't want to try. Tiz the life.
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08/08/2016 4:45 PM ·Spoilers
Games for one. Which my brother hates. I tend to learn things at a much quicker pase(←pretty sure thats spelled wrong) than most. Except when i'm sleep deprived, which i most of the time am... I'm pretty sure there's more things... But i can't remember, tho this is just me going by what i hear from multiple people. (Sometimes even peops i just met.) So i can only assume it's true,
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08/08/2016 4:49 PM ·Spoilers
Yeah, it can be a new typo OC! And ahhh, I see! Then I think you should pick up new art tech pretty well! If you get to sleep that is. XD
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08/08/2016 4:52 PM ·Spoilers
@Tintin So true! Even after being told that they can be tough! It should be fun when you are allowed to be harsher but not rude. Shira is very reasonable to talk to aswell.
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08/08/2016 4:53 PM ·Spoilers
Is knowing everything an option? T^T I've heard peops apologize for having different opinions before, like seriously? why would that offend someone? Also, why are peops so easily offendable and salty. Also also, i've used up half of my post, so i'll be off for now taking a nap.
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08/08/2016 5:06 PM ·Spoilers
@Xan Yeah, she's chill. Like, if someone wanted to end a friendship over silly opinions, it wouldn't be much of a friendship... @Shi People are silly. We just need to accept instead making others accept (unless it's like world-domination, cuz dats bad). Arivvederci (see ya)~♪
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08/08/2016 5:11 PM ·Spoilers
Cause people don't wanna offend others. Being different is great! As long as you are understanding and peaceble. @Tintin Very true. People can be too touchy. @Shira Have a nice nap!
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