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09/27/2016 11:03 PM ·Spoilers

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  • I stood up and made Ourselves coffee when i came back henwas different and it felt likemone of my nightmares came true. his eyes where as black as a bottomless pit and he spoke his voice not his own,"your Boyfriend is dieing look at me in the eyes and save him." i did what the voice tyold me to do and he was now possesing me.I saw my true love only once before my eyes clouded over with darknes

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  • Good job I love this .

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  • thanks now comes Chapter 3

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  • "Your so foolish to think that she loves you.I mean you stole her heart and now...I CAN CRUSH IT"! A sinister laugh left my lips and i was gone he knew it the thing possesing me new it a d i knew that i was never going to make this out...alive.

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  • CHAPTER 3 lost love "please just let her go" Marks soothing lovable voice was faint but still heard. "Aw i cant to that now can i.I'M THE ONE WHO GOT YOU MARRIED IN THE FIRST PLACE, but no you still loved her", in that moment she let me see him"help me" it never gave me enough time to have his face in my memory and i dissapeared once again.

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  • Good job!

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  • But before i was truly gone he jumped up pulled my body down and kisses my lips as deeply has he could,i kissed back urging to not let the moment end and what ever was inside me had left and when we came up for air our bodies tired especially mine i feel into him as weak as a rag doll and he wispered something in my ear"your back your really back".

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  • It was so embarrasing that day because she wore white and i could see right through the white. I ran to the closet, got a towel and wrapped it around her. We sat by the hot fire and warmed ourselves up but it was kind of awkward she wanted to sit with me on my chair, so i let her and she felt so warm she was cuddling with me. I sang a melody and she feel asleep but i kept on singing.

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  • we lied on the floor me tangled in his arms and legs we slept for what seemed like a decade. when i awoke Mark was still holding on to me tightly and brought me closer then i had ever been to him ever seance i was kissing him in the forest.

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  • When i finished i feel asleep with her on me.

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  • i turned to face him our faces not even an centimeter apart and i kissed his nose and we stared into eachothers eyes until we both either got tired or hungry. i kissed him on his soft lips and smiled standing up to get us both something to eat and drink.

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  • CHAPTER 4: The suprise As i sat at the table eating some icecream for breakfast Mark sat across from me sharing the ice cream an feeding it to eachother. "when we met in the forest i wanted to ask you something but you were unconscious and i put it on you while you were sleeping. His hand grazed mine and he eyeballed the ring on my finger. I blushed when i relised where the ring came from.

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  • "What did you want to ask me in particular?" i was playing dumb knowing his question. "I wanted to ask you to marry me but then i relised that we had only just met so its a promise ring until we get olde-" before he could finish i practically pounced on him and kisses his face like he had just gotten me a new puppy. "thank you for the ring and being here for me."

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  • After the last few crazy days Mark left and i never saw him after that day,but i did see him in a casket. He died a month later in a car crash.I was Devistated and i brought a dagger with me to the veiwing.i never took the ring off in life nore death. As tears ran down my face i stabbed myself and got in his casket hugging his corps and soon i to became his corps girlfriend.

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