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11/25/2016 5:51 PM ·Spoilers

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OC's are great but some of them are bad..So, I'll give you advice to fix your OC! Comment them if you want your OC to be reviewed. TROLLS WILL BE BLOCKED AND REPORTED ;) Trust me, I know a Mary Sue when I see them.

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  • Toni 2.0

    11/25/2016 9:40 PM ·Spoilers

    Leila and Danae Mario Age: 7 (twins) Appearance: Leila: shoulder length dark brown hair, frilly green shirt, cyan skirt black mary-jane shoes Danae: Orange hair, tangerine off-shoulder tank top w/ a black shirt underneath, indigo skirt, black leggings, green boots Alignment:good Personalities: Leila is a shy sweetheart while Danae is a sassy tomboy

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  • ºJαιαρεñøº

    11/26/2016 8:11 AM ·Spoilers

    I'm going to edit my OC Name-Tori Prittle Age-16 almost 17 Height-5'8" Skin tone-A small tan Eyes-Brown Hair-Dark brown on top, fades into blonde tips Wears-Tight, black spaghetti-strap top, faded skinny jeans, purple high-tops. Personality-Brave, "cool", musical, loyal, friendly, always somehow smiling. Likes-Friends, dogs, TØP. Also wouldn't be able to live without music. Dislikes-(cont.)

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  • ºJαιαρεñøº

    11/26/2016 8:19 AM ·Spoilers

    Dislikes-Anyone/anything in her way, spiders, and most of all when her friends are in danger or struggling in life. Extra-Plays guitar, mandalin, cello, and saxaphone. Also enjoys editing music online and posting it on social media. Sings beautifully. Backstory-Her parents were both singers. They loved music and encouraged Tori to take music lessons to learn to sing and play instruments. (cont.)

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  • ºJαιαρεñøº

    11/26/2016 8:24 AM ·Spoilers

    One day, when Tori was ten, her parents p@ssed @way in a terrible fire when they were at a concert in Hollywood. Tori was devistated. She countinued doing music in their honor. After a while she was a star in her school chourus, and in the school's marching band.

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 9:50 AM ·Spoilers

    @Pape I like how realistic your character is but more details would really give him a spark! 7/10

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 9:55 AM ·Spoilers

    @Toni I like the whole 'twins' part but since this bio is for two people instead of one, it should be much larger. I suggest giving them both separate bios instead of cramming them both in one. They're both different people with different personalities. Really take the time to explain them^^ 8/10

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  • ☆♪★Neko★♪☆

    11/26/2016 9:55 AM ·Spoilers

    My oc #1 in fav post (if you can get to it)

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  • ☆♪★Neko★♪☆

    11/26/2016 9:56 AM ·Spoilers

    or all of em if you want

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 9:58 AM ·Spoilers

    @Puggle Wonderful! You're OC has really improved and I'm sure you think so too! I like the backstory! I hope you love your OC as much as I do <3 10/10

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  • ºJαιαρεñøº

    11/26/2016 10:03 AM ·Spoilers

    Thank you ^^

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 10:09 AM ·Spoilers

    @ Neko (Twins review) Again, I love the details! The diversity between both characters is great! I'd just change the color changing eyes or explain why they're that way. 9/10

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 10:11 AM ·Spoilers

    @Neko (Scales) Honestly, I like this OC a lot. Detail was fabulous as always. I think this OC's ready for a backstory^^ 10/10

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  • ºJαιαρεñøº

    11/26/2016 10:12 AM ·Spoilers

    You wanna RP sometime?

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 10:15 AM ·Spoilers

    @Neko (Inferno) Same as Scales, I wouldn't change a thing. A good backstory would make them more lively^^ 10/10

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 10:16 AM ·Spoilers

    @ Used to be Puggle but is now Willa (I think) Of course! I love to RP soon <3

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  • ης☆Pape

    11/26/2016 10:17 AM ·Spoilers

    OC Redo: Name: Pape Age: 9-16 Height: 4'8"- 5'8 Apperence: Has not the dark brown skin, and very very very dark Brown hair. Eyes are light Brown. Wears a Purple T-Shirt with a Star in the middle sybolizing his love for stars. Wears Long Navy Blue Sweatpants and and Black Adidas. Likes: Mario, Being VERY Sorcastic, Bad puns, Hang Out with Friends/Family. Extras: Has a Black Wiiu and 3DS

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 10:19 AM ·Spoilers

    @Pape Much better! <3 10/10

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  • ης☆Pape

    11/26/2016 10:21 AM ·Spoilers

    that he really loves and plays moat of the time. Mother and Father in California because of business. He doesn't know when they are coming back, so he always tries to do his best on everything so they don't get dissapointed in him. Has a Blue Cap his parents made for him when he was little. (Better, Worse?)

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  • ης☆Pape

    11/26/2016 10:22 AM ·Spoilers

    Thank you! I'm doing a Pokemon RP. I'll follow you so I can tell you when I'm doing an RP involving Humans.

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  • Nintendork

    11/26/2016 10:23 AM ·Spoilers

    @Pape <(^-^)b Better

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