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04/05/2017 12:00 PM ·Spoilers

２回目の漫画です！四コマを書いて見ました♪　　　お話を考えるのに苦労しました。絵も少し苦労しました。もし上手だと思ったらコメントや共感、フォローお願いします♪

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ものすごく言いにくいんですけど「きずく」ではなく「きづく」なのです..　コメ失礼致しました..г°

Yeahs8

グッド！グッド！！！！！！！

Yeahs0

うますぎなんですけど…私が書いたやつよりもよっぽど上手い。

Yeahs0

また、コメントさして頂きます。この物語も面白いですね！絵も、お上手です。背景も描いているのですか？

Yeahs0

4コマ目にちょっとアドバイス… 日本人は、自然に右からものを読んでいくので…このままだと、『高っ！』『8700円』になります。値段を聞いてリアクションじゃないとおかしいので、フキダシが逆だと思います。

Yeahs2

あと、これって手書きじゃないですよね?

Yeahs3

絵っていつもと違うくない？絵、ホントに苦労したの？？ww

Yeahs1

あ、これは書いてませんね。

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