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04/21/2017 7:46 PM ·Spoilers

恋をした日第2話コメントしてね。後見えにくいところをいってください。コメントらんにのせておきます。

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初評価失礼します。う～ん…だいぶ殺風景ですね…。風景はわざと無しですか？ and、女子がやりがちな顔アニメでもあります。 (もう少し風景を取り入れ、顔だけでなく他で、そのキャラの気持ちを表現する) さらにアングルを変えることで、見ていて楽しい&動きのある漫画に仕上がるかと思います。続きを楽しみにしています*

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ごめんなさい、誤字！顔アニメx顔漫画o 申し訳ございませんm(_ _)m

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