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05/26/2017 2:33 PM ·Spoilers

Open Closed

Under the barn

Chapter 2 The children wandered almost blindly in the caves. It was not they heard the scratching again. Only this time, closer. It wasn’t as faint as the last time and the two boys could feel their hearts speeding up. David stopped and said, “ The scratching. What is it…? “ “ I- I don’t know… “ Steven quietly said. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a speckled gray cat ran out.

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  • David panicked and ran. “ David! Where are you going!? Come back!” Steven screamed. “ You know I hate cats! “ He retorted. Steven screamed, “ David! Come back! “ Steven ran after David, desperately trying to catch him. Until, an invisible force blocked him and his vision went black. He fell to the cold stone floor. Darkness. Cold. Steven slowly opened his eyes.

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  • He half expected to wake up in his bed, or on David’s floor, in a sleeping bag but, no. He was in the dark caverns. Alone. “ David! Where are you!? “ He yelled. He franticly looked around. “ David! It’s me! Steven!” He screamed. The darkness of the cave seemed to get darker. He was alone. Alone. What had happened to David? He was alone in the darkness.

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  • He couldn’t hear the scratching, much less the footsteps. Where was David? He was panicked. How must David feel? Worried and sad tears came to his eyes. He quickly wiped them away. He had to be strong. He had to find David. He couldn’t though. More tears rolled down his cheeks. This time, he didn’t try to stop them. He curled in a ball, hoping someone would find him.

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  • No one did. After a while of sitting there, crying, he breathed deeply. He wiped the tears that were on his face and did his best to not curl up in a tighter ball and sob. He stood up. He breathed deeply again and said, “ I...I’m gonna find you David...I have to. I know I will. You’re somewhere. I’m somewhere. That’s all I need. I know you’re ok. We will find each other. “

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  • He couldn’t help but smile. He walked forward. But, the further he got, the darker it got. He couldn’t continue in this. He could barely see. “ Ugh. I can’t do this. It’s too dark. “ He mumbled. Steven noticed something was in his back pocket. “ W-what…? “ He said. He reached to his back pocket. He took the thing out and dimly saw a ...flashlight? How did that get there?

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  • The only thing he had on him was his backpack, which had a water bottle and some clothes he was going to change into the next day. He said, confused ,” This ...doesn’t make sense. “ “ Nothing makes sense in this world… “ He heard a voice say. “ W-what?! Who is that? Where are you? David? “ He yelled. “ Oh...I’m not David. But I’m sure we’ll meet soon, “ It replied.

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  • “ What do you mean? “ He asked. “ You’ll see. “ It said. “ No!” He exploded. “ You- “ It cut him off. ” Don’t throw a fit, you crybaby, “ It remarked. “ Ugh, “ He thought ”, The voice could see that? “ The voice sounded feminine. He was 99% sure she was a girl. He had to be sure though. “ You’re a girl, right? “ He asked.

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  • It replied “, ….Isn’t it obvious? “ “ Well, I - “ She just sighed. He continued walking. He saw a door in front of him. He walked through it. “ Hey.. ‘ He asked, “ Who are you? Why are you here? “ She didn’t respond. He yelled “, Hey! “ No response. He sighed. He spotted a door in the room. He went through it. Food! A bowl of candy bars. A bowl of macaroni. A spoon. He smiled.

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  • After he ate, he looked at the bowl of candy bars. He wouldn’t be greedy. He took 4, 2 for him and 2 for David. He walked out of the room. He yawned and layed down to sleep.

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  • I was waiting for this. Enjoyable as usual.

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