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01/13/2015 10:26 AM ·Spoilers

So guys. I guess nearly everyone knows about my fanfic already, and I still need ideas on how some 2nd gen chars arrived in the past and some story explaining how they reached their paralogue etc... Still left are all the males except Inigo.

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Yarumi

01/13/2015 10:29 AM ·Spoilers

In case anyone is interested in reading and/or doesn't understand what I want to say... https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10728366/1/Fire-Emblem-Behind-pixels

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Yarumi

01/13/2015 10:30 AM ·Spoilers

It's chapter 4 and 5 BTW.

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Rebecca

01/13/2015 11:19 AM ·Spoilers

Yay a link! I'll read it when I have some spare time! As for ideas... I've got nothing, sorry! If I think of something I'll post!

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Yarumi

01/13/2015 11:22 AM ·Spoilers

Okay thanks!

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Boris

01/13/2015 12:14 PM ·Spoilers

*Is waiting for Angel to find some good ideas* I'll read it when I have more free time (which is hopefully tomorrow).

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Yarumi

01/13/2015 12:44 PM ·Spoilers

@Boris I actually expected that to happen, too... And I'll so gonna get myself Tomodachi Life tomorrow. I need to get Heichou into this game!

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Boris

01/13/2015 12:56 PM ·Spoilers

@Yarumi Sorry about that but I'm not good at these things. I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't have the game.

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Angel

01/13/2015 1:49 PM ·Spoilers

"Behind Pixels" is best name. No, seriously, even if it's not story related, it's pretty original. @Boris No, you're not! I don't have it as well! I brought a 3DS for Awakening only after a 4- months internal struggle and around less than a year of savings: before this Christmas, I only had Awakening and Shovel Knight... (Added SMT IV & Weapon Shop DE OMASSE) @Boris/Yarumi Y-You guys have far ->

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Angel

01/13/2015 1:54 PM ·Spoilers

too much faith at me, I HAVE *NO* IDEAS! I just try to think of something spur-of-the-moment and usually is qualitatively low... How you were thinking to make them arrive to the past? I can't use the PC right now, and I should read what you written before giving advice. I think you could use the Gerome and Brady suggestion I gave you some time ago, and paralogue's location may help the writing.

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Angel

01/14/2015 3:44 AM ·Spoilers

Readed the work so far. It's not badly written, I assure you. Still, there are some things that you might want to consider: A) When Moniya did a battle examination in Chpt. 1, do try to less use in-game terms, because the alter a little the flow of the story. For example, instead of saying that the Hammer could instantly kill Frederick, try to put it like "Weapons of that ilk are renown to be ->

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Angel

01/14/2015 3:49 AM ·Spoilers

expecially dreadful against knights or soldiers with an heavy equipment, since the blunt impact can easily be felt even through such a tick layer of metal." Just to make an example. Also, on a side note, remember that being a retelling will allow to change some small (or big) situation or events in the story, things you will eventually HAVE to do for example for ChromXOlivia (Moniya's going to ->

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Angel

01/14/2015 3:52 AM ·Spoilers

marry Azure/Inigo, correct? For the text readability, fret not: choose first events and story, you can always re-arrange dialogues and the sort after you finished as you see fit. There is always room for improvement. I didn't understand who the first child was suppose to be... Severa and Cynthia was far too easily identified due to her personalities! (NOT THAT IS A PROBLEM, EH!) Btw, shouldn't

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Angel

01/14/2015 4:06 AM ·Spoilers

Noire be disarmed before her paralogue? Or you're going to fix it later like you'll probably do with Cynthia and her "Father"? For Owain, the story might revolve around how he heard that the blade Mysteltainn was keeped safe in the Sage's Hamlet, waiting for some worthy Hero to been entrusted to. So, self-centered as he is, and seeking further strenght to both change the future and protecting his

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Angel

01/14/2015 4:09 AM ·Spoilers

dear mother, he decided to travel until there. For Brady, I was about to use the suggestion I gave, but you already used a similar model with Severa. What about... He reached a village where there are injured/sicks, and he decide to help them due to his good heart and how his mother always said that "true noble souls should always protect the weakest ones". The villagers show him their gratitude,

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Angel

01/14/2015 4:11 AM ·Spoilers

make him tag along, offering him food and shelter. She decides to stay and tend to the recovering patients, meanwhile searching for his family, until the bandits attacked. Gerome could easily be done with my previous suggestion. Yarne could be saved by the Stonewalls from some bandits attack, after seeing he could transform into a Taguel, and secretly wanting to use him as weapon, offering him

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Angel

01/14/2015 4:14 AM ·Spoilers

some protection and help in his reserch, since they're travelling sellswords as well. Laurent, again, could be very well be done with the previous suggestion. Sorry if this is very messy and long, hope it helped.

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