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02/03/2014 10:59 AM ·Spoilers

Just got back from school! Iam really tired. I have a challenge for you all! Who ever writes the best story in 350 words wins 10 comments 10 yeahs and a follow ! Get writing! The competition ends midn

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  • The crows fillied the gray sky of the silent graveyard. I awoke and stood on my feet, and looked around. I then heard a scream from a woman.. the voice seemed so familiar. But I couldn't place the -

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  • - name of it. I walked closer, my ankles starting to get itchy from the weeds I was walking through. I began running, the voice getting louder, and saw two faces. Both with a pale complexion-

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  • Same as I. I then noticed a guy. He looked like me. I tried talking to him. "Hello..? Hello?" I said. I had gotten no answer. "Why aren't you answering??" I asked, desperately for an answer.-

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  • But nothing. Then it came to me. They were my parents. But why were they not answering? Then a boy appeared beside me. I knew who it was as soon as I saw them. My brother, Wes, the age of fourteen-

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  • Same as me. "Wes? Can you hear me?" I asked. "Yes of course. Why wouldn't I?" He said, sounding surprised. "Well, those are our parents.. Right?" "That is correct, Seth." I glared around. Making-

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  • sure I wasn't dreaming. But it was reality. I horrible one. I looked at the grave, seeing whose it was. The name read "Wes Salohance." "Wes.. that's your grave.. who are you?" I asked, getting more-

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  • tense. "You see, Seth.. I am dead." He said to me, with a blank expression. "Y-you are? You can't be joking. Prove it!" I said. "You want me to prove I am a ghost? Fine." He touched our parents. His-

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  • - hand went right through. "You believe?" I looked, dumbfounded, eyes opened wide. "What about me..?" I asked. "You too, Seth." He replied. "This can't be." I touched my mothers head. It went through-

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  • "Wait. There is only one way to prove it.. I CAN'T be dead. I just CAN'T be." I ran, fast, as fast as my legs could go. I went to where I was when I first awoke. Under a tree, near a grave.-

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  • "Seth Salohance." I passed out. ~The end~

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  • (If I'm correct it's 350 words. I counted. :p)

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