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05/04/2014 8:33 AM ·Spoilers

Two Worlds. Chapter Three - Thunderstorm. WARNING - This is a very sad, and very angry chapter. I put a lot of thought into it. Also it's long, so be patient, and feel free to bookmark. Thankyou.

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 8:36 AM ·Spoilers

    "My parents?" Ryan's tone suddenly changed. "Um... I... I don't know. Thay said it would take months to find them. They escaped prision a month ago. I don't mind the jail cell: at least it's safe."

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    05/04/2014 8:41 AM ·Spoilers

    "I guess that's true." As she finished her sentence, Lola spotted a gentlemen in dark uniform approaching them. "Miss Lola Docks, I have come to inform you of some upsetting news. Your family..."

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    05/04/2014 8:44 AM ·Spoilers

    It was the news Lola had been dreading. She went dizzy, and was sick (thankfully in the toilet), then see sat down crying, and listening to what the ma had to say to Ryan. "And you, Mister Ryan Vench

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 8:47 AM ·Spoilers

    ... We have found your parents... Dead." "Okay." said Ryan, quite quickly, but calmly. The man disappeared. "You seem like you don't care." Lola sniffed. "I don't." replied Ryan, shortly. "How can you

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 8:50 AM ·Spoilers

    say that!" Lola was shocked. "They're your family!" Ryan lost it. "All the ever did was give me grief, and use me as there... There slave! They didn't care for me as a person at all!" "Well, can't

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 8:52 AM ·Spoilers

    you forgive them!?" Lola argued, standing back up, letting here temper rise. By now, loads of prisioners were listening. "You know nothing!! NOTHING!!!" It went silent. Ryan looked at Lola. Lola

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 8:55 AM ·Spoilers

    looked at Ryan. "We need to get out of here." sobbed Lola, faintly. They were both swetty and crying. "Yeah." agreed Ryan, slowly, and steadily. "But... How?" asked Lola. "I don't know." replied Ryan.

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 8:56 AM ·Spoilers

    "But we'll find a way. Together." End of Chapter Three. Ouch. :(

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  • SZ★яσвεяτ

    05/04/2014 12:09 PM ·Spoilers

    you're a good storyteller i wish i was good

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 1:50 PM ·Spoilers

    Thanks Robert! I bet your great at telling tales. =)

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  • SZ★яσвεяτ

    05/04/2014 2:02 PM ·Spoilers

    no... and if i made a story it would take a while cos i don't get ideas often

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 2:19 PM ·Spoilers

    Ok then. It's fine if you don't want to wright a story, but I'm glad your enjoy mine.

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  • SZ★яσвεяτ

    05/04/2014 2:30 PM ·Spoilers

    i really do enjoy your and Abi's story i beat all expert staffs in MK7 last hardest was dk pass

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  • spanner

    05/04/2014 2:31 PM ·Spoilers

    Awesome, good for you!!!

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  • SZ★яσвεяτ

    05/04/2014 2:36 PM ·Spoilers

    i no!!

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